Their topic which talks about whether men should watch adult videos when they have girlfriends is very interesting and novel. Vicky approve it; while Eva disapprove it. In their annotation 1 and 2, they find many sources such as 洪蘭's research. I think their topic is a little similar to my topic. The outcome will differ from country to country. So their annotation 3 and 4 can search information from other country. What's more, it is better if they have media source which could support their opinion.
One of their sources was written by an anonymous author, which was collected from a thesis website. But what interests was that graph was similar with Joselin’s while we had two different analyses. And the mistake they both had was they didn’t find out the background of the author or writer of the articles they cited.
During the conference, professor made them recall the process of preparing from the initial Issue paper to Annotation 2. After she listened to description, she cried out “that is so interesting. Considered it to be tough to work on at first since most people cannot accept it and it obviously has moral defects. Instead of finding a lot of references aimlessly and seeking supporting ideas in them, I had specific thoughts first and then go to find references to prove them.